afiboy69's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[week 9]

love some of these studies however I would suggest not clumping everything on one sheet. The presentation feels a little random and can devalue your work.

vymnis2 responds:

hey thanks for the input man i really appreciate it :). these studies typically arent uploaded to be super impressive just more of like a progress marker but i do believe you have a point. perhaps organising the studies in a more compositionally attractive way could be beneficial.

[WhyNot Minot Fest!]

U get an A ! it seems like you had a lot of fun making this. ur line work and typographic drawings look sweet.

Arvstar responds:

It was fun, so much fun that my kids decided to help and scribbled a few lines themselves haha. thank you for viewing.

[suit up girl!]

great character ,love the lighting however the titty on the left is fucked. other wise great work, develop her more.

shammiemaa responds:

Yeah you right, I didnt see that before thanks.

[Batman vs Zombies]

fucking love it my friend!

wash responds:

thanks!

[Looks Can Kill]

She looks beautiful! value and lighting look great. The arms and hands however feel a little awkward especially the right arm, could be the foreshortening. but also just the angle throws me off a bit. But besides that its looking sweet!

1600 responds:

Thanks for the review, I agree the foreshortening on the right arm could have been done better.

[Nemisis]

i have a suggestions, sometimes what i do is take a drawing i did on paper and ink it after the pencil. The next step is scan and bring it into photoshop create a layer ontop of ur drawing, set this layer to multiply and start filling in the colour. U will be able to see ur drawing through the parts ur colouring. However this is just of the techniques used, there are many other ways. I suggest u go on you tube and watch some tutorials also play around with the different brushes and try customizing ur own. u will get the hang of it the more u do it.

slaurak555 responds:

Thank you so much! This is extremely helpful! Think I'll be trying this out today :)

[Elfa Duendo]

U handle acrylics very uniquely. i rlly like this and I don't have much to say... great character btw.

judio90 responds:

Thanks :´)

[The Future of Birth]

Composition and concept are working very well, I enjoy ur loose brush strokes. I do the same thing often in my own work. My suggestion is to hold on to this and refine it add more details into the couple so u get that pop even more, and this will be an amazing piece.

VincentVyce responds:

Thanks, glad you like it. I do think this is one I would like to come back to and improve

[Astronaut Dreams]

This is rlly dope, the frame rlly does compliment the illustration in the centre, and u have some crazy detail within the astronaut.

G-i-b responds:

Cheers.

[Waves in El Hierro island]

much better

You handle paint some what well...BTW FUCK THAT GUY UNDERNEATH... anyways back to this, waves are beautifully done, gets a little confusing with the rocks. But i do appreciate the brush strokes and textures on them. U need to push ur drawing skill but the painting is where its at for u. If u develop drawing, u will become a kick ass painter. Unfortunately I can't scout u yet because u need two more submissions, I suggest u make this image bigger and work on more paintings for ur next two works. Please take ur time and make them awesome.

Jabalias22 responds:

scout please
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